Peer Review
I received various amounts of helpful feedback on ways to improve my magazine before the final product that I am going to submit to Cambridge. For example, The articles that I have on my content page should also be put on my cover page as like a preview to my magazine, instead of just words to describe my magazine. It was also suggested that I visit a college dorm room and get a picture of that, but that isn't exactly what I am going for because then people might think my magazine is only for college students, when in fact it is not. I need to take more pictures too because I don't have one on the first page of my feature article, but that would improve it greatly. For the font and the writing, I was told multiple times that I should change the colors of the writing because it was hard to see. If I didn't want to change the color, adding an outline around it could draw more attention to it, but I will probably just change the whole color scheme. Also, my topics on my conte...